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The Lily and the Wolf by ~MadOldHag:iconMadOldHag:



The Lily and the Wolf

From my deepest heart I crave for thee, dark ranger.
I never would admit it but my heart’s already thine,
Thou evil bastard stole my soul and all that once was mine,
So hard I tried to hate thou and I failed, my wicked stranger.

Thine poisoned touch, thine lethal kiss, will kill me soon for sure,
Forgotten all my aims and all that was my life,
Despising thou, my love, only for thou I strive.
Each moment thou don’t touch me is like hell, I can’t endure.

Thine kiss, thine skin felt next to mine is all that I desire,
Kiss me, mine dark love, kill me then, as long as thou come near,
Be close to me, my hated love, I so despise you, dear,
Thou art my death but I don’t care, I hate you, my dear Sire!

Molten into one with thou stole all my my heart and mind,
Feeling thou so close to me was all I ever wanted,
Should I hate or love my fate  - thou art the treasure granted,
Mine dark love, come close to me, Thou’re all I want to find.
©2008-2010 ~MadOldHag
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Author's Comments

Bishop one shot. For Kaana Moonshadow.

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:iconmistressjera:
Very nice =) I like how she is falling for him, but hates herself for feeling that way; she knows he will corrupt her but she falls deeper anyway. I also find it can be hard to pull off poems that rhyme nowadays but you did it very well.

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:iconmadoldhag:
Thank you!
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I am glad you like it.

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:iconkaanamoonshadow:
Thank you so much, dear - it turned out so wonderful! :glomp:

You captured Liliana's feelings so well - her doubts, her loathing, and even the longing. She knows that he's no good for her, but cannot let go nonetheless.

I'm so happy that you offered me this gift - thanks again! :iconpounceglomp:

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"This is True Love. You think it happens every day?" :blackrose: from William Goldman's The Princess Bride
:iconmadoldhag:
You're welcome!
I am happy you like it.
And thanks for faving!

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:iconkaanamoonshadow:
How could I not fave it? :D

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"This is True Love. You think it happens every day?" :blackrose: from William Goldman's The Princess Bride
:iconfuxfell:
A Bishop/Lily poem? *squeeee*

You captured Lily's contradicting emotions really well, that twisted love/hate relationship they're drifting to.

Love it :D

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:iconsleepwalkerelf:
Ohh, that's definitely Lily and Bishop! Such a twisted relationship they have...
I especially love the last verse. Awesome work, dear!

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Thank your, dear!
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Thank you for commenting and for the fav!

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